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− | +__________________________________ __+
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− | | XX IN REVIEW: x-dome #09 |
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− | | XX IN REVIEW: x-dome #09 |
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− | | _ released by: ROLE |
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− | | _ releasedate: 99-07-01 |
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− | | _ runs under : YES |
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− | | emulator? |
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− | +________________________________ __+
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Arman/Role recently released the second
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− | issue of his mag X-DOME in English
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− | language and as the old X-DOME fanatic
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− | I still am I couldn't hold myself back
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− | from taking a closer look at this issue
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− | of course. So let's start!
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− | ........................................
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− | _ TECHNICAL REMARKS
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− | ___________________
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− | Hm, does X-DOME work together with
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− | cartridges or not? Good question!
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− | Sometimes it indeed does and sometimes
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− | it does not! But in order to read
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− | through the whole magazine in one flash
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− | without reseting your c64 all the time
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | you really should follow Arman's hint
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− | mentioned in the directory and turn off
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− | all your cartridges, REU expansions,
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− | SCPU's and so on.
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− | The magsystem features a quite fast
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− | build in software speeder however.
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− | In contrast to former (german) issues,
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− | both the keyboard- and joystick controls
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− | are now working 100%.
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− |
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− | _ THE INTRO
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− | ___________
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− | There is no intro this time, so nothing
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− | more to tell here.
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | _ THE INTERFACE
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− | _______________
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− | The main menu picture pixeled by VIP/
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− | ROLE looks a bit strange in my eyes,
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− | it seems to me, gold old VIP mixed up
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− | a bit too many different styles this
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− | time. However the big "X D" Logo
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− | underlayed by a stone-like background
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− | pattern looks quite great, the contrast
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− | in colours was well chosen.
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− | The really "strange" part of VIP's
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− | picture are the icons representing the
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− | four main groups of chapters the mag
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− | is divided in, because you really can't
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− | recognize which icon is representing
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− | what! Of course you can find it out
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | quite easily with one single click,
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− | but I guess creating some maybe a bit
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− | more suitable icons wouldn't have been
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− | such a great afford, would it?
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− | Would you e.g. imagine a girl with a
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− | vibrator standing for the "Editorial"?
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− | I guess not!
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− | The text viewer comes with a huge and
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− | colourful "X-Dome" logo in great shapes
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− | pixeled by TMR/ONSLAUGHT/COSINE, its
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− | background is kept in dark gray, the
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− | chars in light grey, so a rather good
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− | reading comfort is guaranted.
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− | The status bar placed directly under
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− | the logo is rather useless I'd say,
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | but of course my opinion must not always
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− | be right! Just see for yourself.
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− | All in all the outfit deserves a rating
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− | of 06/15 points, I'd say.
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− |
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− | _ THE CHAPTERS
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− | ______________
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− | These are naturally the most important
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− | part of every discmag, so let's take
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− | a closer look at them:
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− | As already mentioned some lines above
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− | the chapters are divided in four main
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− | cathegories.
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− | Let us call them "Editorial", "Demoscene
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Forum", "Miscellaneous" and last but not
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− | least "Party Tales".
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− |
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− | The EDITORIAL Section comes up with a
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− | long Leading Article written by Arman,
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− | in which he mainly tries giving people
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− | some more or less important tips in how
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− | enjoying reading almighty X-DOME and so
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− | on. Yeah, very intereresting...
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− | The second part of this text deals with
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− | gerneral information about the X-DOME
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− | Staff, Credits and so on.
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− | Altogether this is not what I would call
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− | a good preface for a c64 magazine,
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− | unless you're a ROLE-Member of course!
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Reactions contains two individual
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− | reactions on issue #8 by RORSCHACH/
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− | PADUA/NO-NAME and a guy called TUISKO
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− | STEINHOFF (never heard of him) and
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− | several answers on general questions
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− | to the editors. Nothing special here,
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− | just a chapter nearly every mag nowadays
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− | has, I believe.
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− |
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− | The Adress List has become quite a small
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− | one this time, this surely depends on
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− | the low annount of snail sheets that got
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− | spread with issue #8.
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− | OK, so much for the EDITORIAL.
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | The DEMOSCENE FORUM covers a large
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− | annount of different kinds of
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− | information about the latest happenings
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− | in our scene.
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− | The News Part has become quite a big
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− | one this time, most of the really
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− | actual and varied news on the latest
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− | incidents in nearly all active nowadays
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− | scene groups got supplied by MacGyver/
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− | DMAGIC, a name that stands for nothing
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− | than quality for sure.
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− |
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− | Next is Charts, with just 17 votesheet
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− | fillers this time, due to some mistake
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− | the staff made by spreading the sheets.
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Yeah, things can only get better...
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− | No further comment here.
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− | This issues Scene Poll deals with the
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− | situation of todays mag scene.
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− | It got spread by Arman via E-Mail to
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− | some chosen guys (what about making
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− | public scene polls, dude?) and the
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− | majority of its fillers still regard
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− | the mag scene as mega-active and are
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− | more than satisfied with the annount
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− | of mags getting released these days.
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− | Well, I guess you don't have to be
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− | Albert Einstein to realize that this
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− | cannot be the case, but if you look at
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− | the fillers names you might understand.
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | What the heck do people like MR. SEX,
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− | FUNGUS, FANGORN, etc., whose only
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− | activity seems to be hanging around
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− | in #C-64 IRC know about the situation
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− | of todays mag scene? Nothing, because
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− | they're simply not involved in this
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− | field! Sorry Arman, but you asked the
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− | wrong guys about the wrong topic!
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− | You can't just surf through #C-64
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− | picking some guys you think are known
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− | enough for you and your mag profiling
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− | yourself and leaving the entirely
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− | topic behind! It really seems to me
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− | that Arman just wanted to have some
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− | popular names in his magazine, his
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− | attitude should be clear...
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | The Profile of Nastiness, Inc. I guess,
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− | there nobody who does not know the name
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− | of the former main editor of the
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− | legendary Tribune Magazine. Although I
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− | really cannot see much sense in
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− | interviewing persons who left scene long
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− | time ago and have no connection to
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− | todays scene any more, this interview
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− | really contains some very interesting
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− | thoughts not only about scene business.
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− | So it's really worth reading after all.
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− |
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− | Magreview Number 1 starts with a list of
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− | all(?) magazines that got released from
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− | November of '98 till July of '99. Quite
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− | an unusual way to start such a chapter,
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | why not simply putting this list into
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− | the Newsflash? At least one mag, namely
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− | Dimension Issue#2 with the releasdate
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− | of June 29th 1999 is missing in this
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− | list, so be careful with the phrase of
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− | "all". After Arman is finally finished
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− | with his blabla about active mailscene
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− | (yeah, maybe back in 1998, but...) once
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− | again, he decides that it's now time for
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− | starting with the first review of non
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− | other mag than Dimension Issue#1 by
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− | Tempest.
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− | The review itself could have been a bit
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− | more detailed in some ways, also style
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− | and use of language cannot be classified
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− | as originla or brilliant.
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Just look at phrases like "(...)under
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− | the lead of the maineditor Floyd(...)"
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− | or "(...)during the whole magazine a
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− | nice Dimension Logo by JB is filling the
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− | right side of the screen (...)" which
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− | are neither grammatically correct nor do
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− | they represent a good piece of
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− | journalistic style.
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− | Objectivity is surely given in this
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− | review, but it's quality and style that
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− | are missing!
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− |
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− | Magreview Number 2 deals with Xenoglossy
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− | Issue #2 by Banshee. No further comment
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− | here, just look at my remarks above,
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− | because here it's just the same...
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Mags Today happenes to be some sort of
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− | "Arman's Guide to Magazine Galaxy".
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− | It comes up with a list of all magazines
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− | "alive" today. Well, I don't think you
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− | can call mags like "Driven", "Nitro",
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− | "Propaganda", "Relax" (hahahaha!),
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− | "Vandalism News", etc. "alive" any more
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− | better phrases would be "delayed like
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− | hell" or even "dead" (in case of
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− | "Driven" and "Relax" (which got NOT
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− | released under the label of Oxyron, dear
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− | Arman, but PHUTURE) this one surely is
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− | the right choise.
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− | However the guide also features a second
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− | list with so-called "important" mags
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− | that died in the course of the last
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | couple of years. Hm, the question is,
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− | do magazines like "Adwarp English" or
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− | "Necropsy" really fit in here?
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− | I and also many other people do not
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− | think they ever played such an important
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− | role in the mag scene after all!
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− | The last article in this forum is called
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− | The Party 8-Music Review (hm, was there
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− | just one tune released in Aars?) and
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− | it's supplied by ABBADON/DAMAGE.
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− | All in all his reviews are nothing
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− | special. The only critical remarks that
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− | could be mentioned here are that he in
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− | some (not all!) of his reviews could
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− | have gotten a bit more into detail,
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | also it would have been a rather nice
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− | idea playing the tunes both on old and
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− | new SID in order to point out the
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− | differences in quality, e.g. concerning
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− | RAYDEN's tune! These things meanwhile
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− | should be standard in every party music
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− | reviews, shouldn't they?
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− |
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− | MISCELLANEOUS features articles dealing
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− | with topics from in- and outside the
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− | scene.
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− |
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− | The C64 XXX Report is supposed to be
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− | some kind of "review" of several C64
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− | Erotics GFX Collections. This article
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− | is simply pure trash with no sense in it
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | at all and a pure catastrophe both in
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− | language and style! It reminds the
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− | reader of the good old XDOME german
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− | times immediately, when such articles
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− | were published in every single issue!
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− |
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− | #C64 Everyday Life just contains a
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− | (platin old) logfile from #C-64.
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− | Well, better check out the IRC yourself!
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− | But anyway you get here some really
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− | good tips on what you should definately
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− | NOT do in #C-64, unless you'd like to
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− | be kicked and banned of course!
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− | Arman however seems to have confounded
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− | #C-64 with #Erotic somehow, hasn't he?
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− |
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | Role Diaries is surely one of the
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− | biggest articles in the entire mag,
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− | telling the complete group history of
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− | the known belgium crew from its very
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− | beginning till today, written in the
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− | form of a diary. It's really interesting
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− | to read such a detailed profile of one
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− | of the oldest and still active groups
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− | in our scene. The article would have
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− | been even more perfect without the
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− | catastrophal English in some passages
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− | and the strange change of point of views
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− | (although it is supposed to be a diary,
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− | there are several passages written in
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− | the third person point of view and then
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− | suddenly COMMANDER, the author, suddenly
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | becomes a first person narrator again.
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− | There are also several remarks by
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− | OCHRANA placed in brackets in the course
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− | of whole article which are are little
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− | bit disturbing, I'd say.
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− |
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− | Next is an Advertisement on the new
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− | SID COLLECTION CD by XENOX/AFL'70, taken
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− | from the internet, followed by
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− | an article by OCHRANA dealing with
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− | different aspects of the Millennium
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− | problem. Although the article itself is
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− | quite detailed, it does not bring any
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− | new aspects the majority of the readers
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− | did not know so before already anyway!
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− | The article (or at least parts of it)
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | are seemingly copied from some computer
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− | magazine, at least there are a few
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− | indicators for this supposition.
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− | In the second edition of his column
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− | Taxes or what? COMMANDER compares car
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− | taxes in different european countries,
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− | coming to the conclusion that car
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− | drivers from the Benelux States should
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− | better move to Luxemburg.
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− | Does this article really feature
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− | anything new? Well, that's also the
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− | question here!
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− | OK, so much about this section.
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− |
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | PARTY TALES! Yeah, this one is really
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− | great! It features loads of party
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− | results, reports and of course
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− | invitations. Party on!
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− | Hopefully the staff will keep on their
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− | good work with this section in further
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− | issues.
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− | The only funny thing here is (of course)
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− | COMMANDER's Mekka+Symposium 2k-1 party
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− | report in really "perfect and brilliant"
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− | English. Well Serge, I really cannot
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− | remember myself having taken an airplane
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− | to get home (as you mentioned in your
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− | report). Always remember: It's not
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− | "to flee, flight, flight" but "to flee,
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− | fled, fled", dude!
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | If you haven't found out already, a
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− | click on the grey and sick looking
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− | lady in the middle of the right border
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− | leads you into the music menu,
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− | featuring four exclusive tunes by
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− | AGEMIXER, GLENN RUNE GALLEFOS and DA
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− | BLONDIE and some three additonal ones
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− | by TRIDENT and TAKI.
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− |
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− | Well, it's surely not easy judging the
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− | chapter's quality of the entire mag.
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− | On the one hand we have the brilliant
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− | News Part and Party Coverage, but on
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− | the other hand there is the rest of the
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− | articles, whose quality differs from
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− | rather good (Role Diaries), average
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | (Music Reviews) down to lowest pieces
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− | of crap (Commodore XXX Report, #C-64
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− | Everyday life e.g.).
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− |
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− | One aspect which was disturbing me most
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− | while reading through the different
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− | chapters was the lack of affort the
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− | maineditors ARMAN and COMMANDER put on
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− | style and language. OK, you judge X-DOME
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− | as a second XENOGLOSSY (the mag by
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− | Banshee) with spelling mistakes in
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− | every second line, BUT if there is one
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− | thing that needs to be improved in
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− | furher issues than it is definately the
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− | use of the English language!
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− |
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | The annount of crap texts also could be
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− | reduced a bit, replacing these by
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− | quality articles dealing with topics
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− | the sceners are really interested in!
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− |
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− | Sorry dudes, but any rating of more than
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− | 07/15 would have been a rather bad joke!
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− |
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− |
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− | _ TEXT LAYOUT
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− | _____________
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− | The mag features a 1x1 characterset done
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− | by my old buddy SHRI SADHU/EX-WILLOW.
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− | Everyone who knows Michael's charsets
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− | knows that they stand for quality and
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− | readable chars and lots of special
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | characters and so does this one.
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− | Although it's surely not the best one
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− | Michael ever did and the fact that
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− | (especially in the bold mode) some
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− | letters are sometimes a bit hard to
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− | read due to the fact that the chars
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− | are maybe a bit too small, it is still
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− | absolutely readable and fits into the
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− | whole magazine (which is quite an
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− | important aspect in my mind).
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− |
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− | The quality of the layout itself differs
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− | from chapter to chapter. On the one
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− | hand we've got well structured and
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− | sorted News and Party Coverages, but on
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− | the other hand also very unstructured
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | articles with loads of layout errors in
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− | it such as some of the reviews or the
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− | Mekka+Symposium 2k-1 partyreport by
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− | Commander/Role for example.
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− |
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− | All in all I think that the editors made
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− | much too less use of all the special
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− | characters their character set offers
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− | them in order to pop up the whole layout
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− | a bit.
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− | Sumed up you can say that the text
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− | layout surely is not bad but also
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− | nothing special indeed.
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− | So just an average rating of 07/15.
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− |
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− |
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | _ SO WHAT...?
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− | _____________
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− | X-DOME #9 features some highlights but
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− | also lots of crap that better should
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− | have been left out.
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− | Also the mag is a bit too much Internet-
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− | orientated in my eyes. Leaving the
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− | snailmail scene out nearly completely,
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− | time will show how long this is gonna
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− | work properly (I guess you all remember
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− | the spreading mistake in connection with
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− | with the last issue, don't you??)
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− |
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− | Talking about Internet, that's also
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− | the source most of the quality chapters
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− | in this issue came from! The editors
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | afford of writing quality articles by
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− | themselves at least can't be rated as
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− | extremely high after all.
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− |
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− | To put it in simple words, X-DOME on
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− | this level is an average mag, mainly
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− | ment to be a forum for #C-64 Visitors
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− | and other Netsurfers who like strange
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− | textstyles and giving not more than a
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− | cent on quality language and style, as
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− | these two things definately cannot be
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− | found in this mag, at least not in the
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− | two english issues that got released so
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− | far. The future however is open for
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− | everything of course!
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− |
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− | </pre>
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− | <pre>
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− | _ FINAL RATING
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− | ______________
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− | Intro..............................+++++
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− | Interface..........................06/15
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− | Chapters...........................07/15
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− | Text Layout........................07/15
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− | OVERALL............................07/15
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− | ========================================
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− | _______________________________SCORPE___
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− | </pre>
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